GCSE ENglish Homework Advice/Help?

In English, our homework is to describe the person that our teacher puts us with...


And basically, well firstly, is it good? and what can be improved? and secondly, i need to add a bit more, but i have no idea about what to describe.





By the way...its only about his appearance and personaility, nothing to do with hobbies, or where he works, or lives etc etc etc.





Heres what ive done so far, im sorry if its not flowing, its because i need to improve it..:





';A laid-back looking figure places himself on an overused, wooden chair. He鈥檚 that one person that makes himself stand out from the crowd with his overall bubbly and mischievous character . However, a more humorous perspective is present, from the sarcastically arched and raised eyebrows that are stitched across his forehead.


Sage green and mysterious, his slightly beady eyes could easily dart across the room and stare at anything that moves.


However, his skin is clear, similar to a summer sky. There is no obvious freckle, dimple or spot eager to be shown insight. However, a natural blush rapidly seeps through and contrasts his flawless skin, as the moon contradicts the dark of the night.


Lying on the top of his oval skull, lies a bed of pale toffee hair, mixed in with beige highlights, which is cut to right above his obscured ears and tamed with the excessive use of gel.


He usually styles laid-back casual clothes which dangle heavily from his perpendicular shoulders, as a mysterious cracked smile creeps out and stretches from one end of his face to another. His posture, relaxed and rather slouched, suggests he has a calm and informal nature.';








Thanks ALOT!!!





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Thats pretty impressive, I think thats a difficult task because if you get paired with someone ugly you have still got to try and write something good in order to not offend them! I think your doing pretty well at the moment, as for advice, I hated english with a passion so Ive not got much there apart from keep up the good work!GCSE ENglish Homework Advice/Help?
You are very descriptive and thats awesome, I think its great
its the best answer...you don't need any more of it....





other wise u know wat will happen????????????





that guy will sit on your head!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you have an amazing way with words, this is excellent